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Weak


Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 86
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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Weak



I'm strong,
I'm strong,
but oh how weak I am,
to crumble at your words,
how easily I am bought
with your sleezy pickup lines
and cheap lies,
how sickening it is
to see my face now,
to see that worm of a person
waiting
for the bird to attack,
how i hate it,
today i hate it,
For a disapointing day it was
to be me
in my eyes




Submitted on 2007-07-23 18:43:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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