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    dots Submission Name: Your thoughts killed all the love in my headdots

    Author: PrettyHeart
    ASL Info:    39
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/55/53
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsYour thoughts killed all the love in my headdots

    Your thoughts killed all the love in my head

    Wounds they are opened, ripped by a thought.
    Bleeding through my mind drop by drop.
    Puddles, they form deep in my soul.
    Growing weaker from the weeping hole,
    Struggling hard to fight the pain.
    Your memory strikes a vein.
    No longer able to breath, thoughts suffocate me.
    Fighting hard to hold on,to what I can no longer see.
    The fight is over, my life is dead.
    Your thoughts killed all the love in my head.

    Submitted on 2007-07-24 09:35:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This Is All To True
    Its Short But Has Alot Of Meaning Behind The Words
    Great Poem
    Love Stacey
    | Posted on 2007-07-25 00:00:00 | by AngelinDisguise | [ Reply to This ]

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