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    dots Submission Name: Wishdots

    Author: PrettyHeart
    ASL Info:    39
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/55/53
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 455
    Average Vote:    3.0000
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    Why are you still here?
    Do you not understand ?
    I wished you to leave me.
    This is my lonely tear,
    Watch it, don't blink!
    It's the last you'll see.

    For I don't love you.
    I wished you heard.
    I didn't love you at all.
    For you wished it true.
    I wished it with a word.
    In a voice so small.

    So maybe it was never heard.
    I am so sorry to say it.
    But you hurt me really bad.
    I never liked that word.
    I'll wish to take it back every bit.
    It has made us really sad.

    Submitted on 2007-07-24 09:56:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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