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    Author: DontLetGo421
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 118/238/141
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    sometimes i sit back and wonder
    beneath the falling rain and thunder
    how things would have been now
    if i had only known how

    all my choices lead to different roads
    contemplating if they were even correct
    comparing my optional life and my life now
    i am stuck on which i would select




    Submitted on 2007-07-24 21:04:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I Like This
    Especially the lines
    "sometimes i sit back and wonder
    beneath the falling rain and thunder"
    Once Again Another Great Poem
    Love Stacey
    | Posted on 2007-07-25 00:00:00 | by AngelinDisguise | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this one a lot!!!!! Yea!!!

    Just remember you always have a new path to take, it is up to you if dare to venture unto a less travel road or the one most travel. It is often the less traveled path that leads you to the place you have been looking for, although you may encounter more obstacle to clear before you reach your destination. But in the end it is always worth it.
    | Posted on 2007-07-24 00:00:00 | by PrettyHeart | [ Reply to This ]


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