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    dots Submission Name: something i want to saydots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 272
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 795
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1508



    Description:
       I Started Off Writing A Poem And It Turned Into Lyrics
    Im Gonna Put Music To It All Ill let You All Know If Its Any Good


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    dotssomething i want to saydots
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    how can someone make me so sad
    but still i want him soo bad
    how can he break my heart
    and still i dont want us to be apart
    this feelin that i got
    is tellin me there is no one else but you

    theres something i wanna say
    but i dont wanna scare you away
    cause the way you make me feel
    i really want it to stay

    please just come back to me
    i dont know what to say or do
    cause my life just aint the same without you
    every day i was with you
    is bein replace by the days we are spending apart
    i just want you to understand
    that i can be more then just your friend

    theres something i wanna say
    but i dont wanna scare you away
    cause the way you make me feel
    i really want it to stay

    i cant give you the finest things
    i cant drive you round in a benz
    but ill prove just how much you mean to me
    ill prove just how much i love you
    ive watched you cry
    ive heard you tell me a lie
    but nothing hurts me more
    then knowing your not my guy


    theres something i wanna say
    but i dont wanna scare you away
    cause the way you make me feel
    i really want it to stay

    theres something i wanna say
    but i dont wanna scare you away
    cause the way you make me feel
    i really want it to stay
    i love you why cant you feel the same




    Submitted on 2007-07-24 22:27:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      this is really good and i know eaxactly how you feel. Joanna
    | Posted on 2007-07-30 00:00:00 | by heartless_ | [ Reply to This ]
      i love this.!!!
    i totally know how you feel in this.
    | Posted on 2007-07-25 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]


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