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    dots Submission Name: Seven Shadesdots
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    Author: Euphoria
    ASL Info:    19/M/WCU
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 37/25/31
    Words: 223
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Angry
    Total Views: 873
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1455



    Description:
       I don't know about you, but fighting is fun.


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    dotsSeven Shadesdots
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    Verse

    Pushing and shoving to you may seem loving
    Donít do it to men to whom you mean nothing
    You left me out, sold me out, something to fight about
    I hope youíve had fun, because now you are done

    Chorus

    I am beating you down into the ground
    Six feet under is where you lay now
    Iím beating you down for selling me out
    Iím beating you, beating you, round after round

    (Instrumental breakdown)

    Verse 2

    Sitting and waiting as your time is wasting
    I canít believe you could think it was through
    You cut me out, threw me out, left me to scream and shout
    When no sorry has come, itís my time for fun
    Itís slow and itís painful, this force you canít handle
    Itís creeping for one, you donít know when it comes
    It beats you up, shuts you up, wonít leave you standing up
    If you slip now, then itís coming out

    Chorus

    I am beating you down into the ground
    Six feet under is where you lay now
    I am beating you down till you make no sound
    Seven shades have been beaten out

    (Instrumental bridge)

    {Screamed}
    Seven shades-----------of blood beaten out
    Seven shades-----------of shit beaten out
    Seven shades-------------------------------
    Seven shades beaten out of you





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