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    dots Submission Name: Did you think at all?dots
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    Author: EyesOfMight
    ASL Info:    17/F
    Elite Ratio:    3.44 - 11/14/16
    Words: 222
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
    Total Views: 158
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1234



    Description:
       This is about another one of my past relationships.... where he would always promise me things but never go through with them, he just kept on hurting me and draging me down.


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    dotsDid you think at all?dots
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    I shouldn’t let you effect me anymore
    But it seems I have no control
    Over these feelings you have set inside me

    You never called, you promised you would
    And your pity excuse was “I never could”
    You shoved her in my face and told me I was yesterdays news

    Did you not think that would hurt me?
    Did you not think I would back away?
    Did you not think at all?

    How can you truly sit there while I am so far away
    Don’t you hurt?
    Or are you fine with having a fake high to get me off your mind

    Most say to me that it’s your loss
    And I’m beginning to think the same
    You only hurt me in the end

    So why do I let you effect me?
    Why do I let your silence cause me never ending pain
    What went wrong

    You were the only one I let my self trust
    And I knew you would let me down
    And now you have

    Cant you see
    There’s no one to truly blame
    It’s just how it worked out in the end

    We knew it would never last forever
    We let our hearts deceive us
    We only feared loneliness







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      Very, very, very deep. And a right way to be angry...I hate being a guy sometimes, because of what we all do to women.. This guy doesn't seem to be that person you should spend your time on grieving, because through this poem it is very well obvious that he doens't give a s hit about you, and well maybe you shouldn't give a s hit about him...But hey, it's easier said than easier done. Though your angry and say these words, that well, sounds like this ass hole desearves, your still suffering from him, and therefore, you have not gotten completely over him and moved on...And the very three lines of your poem have prooved my poem for me. You should have perfect control over the feelings these people leave inside of you, this breakup may be recent, so your still suffering, but if this was awhile back, you need not to think about arrogant men like him anymore...Don't let him control your mind, your life, because this is actually what all men want, they want to feel secure through there exes anger and their rage, that they think of this new girl that you state he found in your poem, that he will come back to you if things don't work out...Its called rebound insuarance, it's the stupidist most sickest [censored] that I heard out of one of my friends the other night...Pathetique, idiocarasy...I loved the words on your poem, they were so true, and every passion of anger truely came out...Please do a favor keep in touch.
    | Posted on 2007-08-08 00:00:00 | by Crestfallenman | [ Reply to This ]



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