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    dots Submission Name: We are gonna make itdots
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    Author: EyesOfMight
    ASL Info:    17/F
    Elite Ratio:    3.44 - 11/14/16
    Words: 373
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Friendship
    Total Views: 1161
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2181



    Description:
       This is a song i wrote a while ago, its just pretty much saying that You can make it, no matter what you can make it. You are strong and you can do it, all you have to do is believe.


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    Cradling everything you ever loved
    In your circle of Unstrengthening arms
    Death loss it all blurs together
    This pain is just to much to handle

    If you will fight
    Then you can make it
    You can survive this night
    You can survive this terror
    You can endure through the storm
    You are gonna make it
    You have the strength to hold on
    Our race was created strong

    We are gonna make it
    We are gonna make it
    We are gonna make it
    Can we truly make it?

    Trying to pick your self up day after day
    Just seems to get old and tiring
    But you wonít give up for your own sake
    But will your own strength be enough

    You are gonna fight
    You are gonna make it
    You will survive this night
    You will survive this terror
    You will endure through the storm
    You are gonna make it
    You have the strength to move on
    Our race was created strong

    We are gonna make it
    We are gonna make it
    We are gonna make it
    Can we truly make it?

    Baby I know youíre scared we both are
    I know this fear seems never ending
    But we have survived this far
    Which means we can make it through

    We are gonna fight
    We are gonna make it
    We will survive this night
    We will survive this terror
    We will endure through the storm
    We are gonna make it
    We have the strength to move on
    Our rave was created strong

    We are gonna make it
    We are gonna make it
    We are gonna make it
    Can we truly make it?

    Canít you see you can set your self free
    All youíve got to do is believe
    Jump to see that you can fly
    Touch that bright blue sky

    We are gonna make it, yeah
    We are gonna make it
    We are gonna make it
    Yes we can truly make it

    We are gonna make it, canít you see
    We are gonna make it
    We are gonna make it
    Yes we can truly make it




    Submitted on 2007-07-25 02:10:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You dont cease to amaze me.
    Sounds like something yeh might hear on the radio.





    One insignificant smidget: "But will your own strength be enough" I think that posing the question in there opposes the rest of the song. There shouldn't be a question about making it through, so if it read "And your own strength will be enough" I think it might, meaningfully, be better, but I havn't heard yeh sing it so I can't say it's a horrible thing =P

    Like I said, tiny insignificant smidget on a work of inspirational beauty.
    Hella good job!
    | Posted on 2007-07-25 00:00:00 | by Zai | [ Reply to This ]


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