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    Author: stateXofXmind
    ASL Info:    18/F
    Elite Ratio:    2.09 - 29/49/21
    Words: 81
    Class/Type: Poetry/Fuck it all
    Total Views: 176
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 407



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    I want to be numb
    so I don't feel like shit.
    I want to be numb so I can just push what you say to the side and laugh.
    I want to be numb so I can't feel the pain inside.
    I want to be numb so I can't cry.
    I want to be numb so I can walk away from you.
    I want to be numb so you can't hurt me.
    Someone hit me please?
    I want to be numb.




    Submitted on 2007-07-25 15:24:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      yah i know that feeling.


    being human is the worst. those feeling are ur weaknesess.
    | Posted on 2007-07-25 00:00:00 | by DaGrimReaperess | [ Reply to This ]


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