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    dots Submission Name: Awaiting.....dots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/622/378
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Rant/What you did
    Total Views: 578
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       just at work with Disturbed on and this kinda popped into my head, not really upset or angery. but felt like writing hope you like


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    dotsAwaiting.....dots
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    Awaiting...
    Anticipating..
    For the results of these events that have came into play.

    I simply act out this role
    I simply go along for the ride

    And then I...
    Await

    I await to see what you have done
    I await to see if the courts are going to proceed with what you think is a strong case
    I await to hear from the Canadian officers and how I will make it up there to testify against you

    I wait...
    And go about this daily routine that I have made for myself.
    But do not allow that to fool you my friend

    I may have a routine
    I may have a "set" schedule

    But you have not left my thoughts
    You have not left these endless nightmares
    You have not left my presence

    And frankly I will not allow you to
    Until I find justice for what you have done to me




    Submitted on 2007-07-25 15:39:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      First Comment!!!! I'm on a role. Don't understand what they did though, lol. Wasn't pregnancy was it? Shadow
    | Posted on 2007-07-30 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]


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