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My Silence

Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 149
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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My Silence

My tongue ties
at the thought of you.
it creates my silence
that eats me inside
my silence says,
what's left of us
my silence tells me
that this will just
be enough.

This never ending cycle
of lost lovers
and dying hopes,
it keeps me hooked to you
like an addict to drugs.
But I'm trying to change
I swear I am.
Trying to change
trying to fade out
these feelings
of worthlessness.
Trying to rid myself
of thoughts of

But I'm giving up on you
Slowly and subtly,
I'm shaking the effects of you
off of my skin
So i won't feel
or think
of you anymore.
I know now that your my poison
and with you I shall die.

My silence
is preparing me for the end,
preparing me for the worst,
but for that,
I am ready.

Submitted on 2007-07-25 17:54:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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