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    dots Submission Name: Scratching Yet?dots
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    Author: Peggy Paris
    ASL Info:    61/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 747/570/167
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Satire
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    dotsScratching Yet?dots
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    I know a little part of me
    is wise as wise can be;
    but, my, oh my, how quick it hides
    when common sense does flee.

    Some say my heart speaks all too loud
    and overtakes my brain.
    my intellect's a cloudy haze;
    strange thoughts, I entertain.

    Each night in dreams I find escape,
    or maybe it finds me.
    Where's rationale in abstract art
    or sense in fantasy?

    I know I'm smart enough to see
    that finding humor's key
    so let's just say that life's a dog
    and I'm an active flea.

    Yes, it's okay to scratch your head
    and wonder what I said.
    Just know somewhere I've laid my eggs,
    and fleas do quickly spread.






    Submitted on 2007-07-25 18:40:04     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It would seem to me that if others are to try to ignore you it would be a huge exercise in futility. You shall not be dismissed off hand and your message shall be delivered, one way or another. Very nice little ditty here. It was ultimately enjoyable.
    | Posted on 2007-08-20 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]
      Ha Sharon!

    I gather you're just "having a little fun" with this one! I like the line

    "so let's just say that life's a dog
    and I'm an active flea."

    Give that dog a good bite for me!!!!
    | Posted on 2007-08-05 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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