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    dots Submission Name: i needdots
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    Author: DontLetGo421
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 118/238/141
    Words: 24
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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    dotsi needdots
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    i need to learn to love myself
    before i can let you in
    i need to accept defeat before
    i can appreciate a win




    Submitted on 2007-07-26 22:21:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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