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i need


Author: DontLetGo421
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Words: 24
Class/Type: Poetry /Being a Teen
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i need



i need to learn to love myself
before i can let you in
i need to accept defeat before
i can appreciate a win




Submitted on 2007-07-26 22:21:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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