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    dots Submission Name: A Prophecy Fulfilled?dots
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    Author: Lord Bane
    ASL Info:    24/M/Isle of Wight, UK
    Elite Ratio:    2.26 - 40/81/50
    Words: 393
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
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    Description:
       This is the final part of the backstory, which leads DIRECTLY into the first book. Note: this ends with the events detailed in The Warplord Saga - The Prologue. Apologies if this sounds like Star Wars lol.


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    dotsA Prophecy Fulfilled?dots
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    Shortly before the Demonic Wars and the siege of Phoenix Gate, a prophecy was discovered. It fortold the coming of a powerful psychic who would end up helping the forces of evil. It said that only one person could stop him, known as the "True Chosen One." This prophecy was ignored by most, thought a fraud or a trap laid by the Dark Alliance. One person, however, was about to discover how true it was.
    Earth had been ignored due to the fact no psychics had ever originated from there, but one day 3,000 years ago a member of the allies found a power source on the planet unlike anything he had ever seen. He traced it to a young man in Roman Britain, and took him with him on his ship, determined that this was the warrior they had long sought.
    As the boy grew up, his power surpassed even his mentor's expectations, however he was not the "Chosen One" who would help, as they were soon to discover....
    After a battle against an ancient foe, the now adult returned a changed person. No longer interested in learning to hone the powers he had, he sought greater power, greater than his master was willing to show him, so they went their seperate ways.
    As he fought countless battles against the alliance, the newly dubbed "Warplord" discovered the prophecy, and the prediction that there was one who could kill him. Determined to turn this being's abilities to his own advantage, he began searching, unaware that his master now also sought the same goal. This continued until the year 1987, when a dark twist was to occur. A ship carrying the crystal containing the power of the "True Chosen One" who died at Phoenix Gate was forced to jettison it above Earth to stop it falling into the hands of the Warplord.
    However, they never retrieved it, for the crystal had fallen to Earth, splitting in half within Earth's atmosphere. It would be 12 years before Earth would discover the truth of what happened that day.....
    12 years on, the Warplord headed for Earth, hoping to rule it out as his enemy's hiding place, but the Alliance became aware that their last hope was on that planet. And so began a desperate race against time: who could get to him first?
    To Be Continued




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       it does sound like star wars!

    but it still has your flair. so i am not disappointed, but i will not comment a lot like i have on the others.
    | Posted on 2008-07-25 00:00:00 | by was_i_ever_real | [ Reply to This ]
      Fascinating story line here which grabs interest, however, it reads more like an outline than a would-be novel. It would help to develop the characters, give them names, discriptions, feelings, etc. Slow down, take your time to paint your world(s), as do the great SF authors.
    | Posted on 2007-09-28 00:00:00 | by Blue Monk | [ Reply to This ]


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