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    dots Submission Name: secretive floorboardsdots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 134
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotssecretive floorboardsdots
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    i miss not being blessed by the many...

    till the dares & rains callapse,
    fortescue and times elapsed...

    four & 2 & pours each hallow,
    derive from me all anti-column.
    & cloven and stutter, force of nature
    angled here for all sparks mallow.

    and arrangement of heavens
    lost space lament.

    in increments it slowly follows
    each bluish hour
    with the flapping sea
    about it.

    & only in standing idle
    do rebrant totals fill the air.

    the mossy extremes of earthly always
    patter down the doors of loving
    with the fingers of the all-gaunt spectre
    stuttering with intricate naked colour.

    blushing & subtle
    in the most beautiful eyes of yours...

    a kiss, not to be bested by any...




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