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    dots Submission Name: the agape moonsdots
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    Author: blackbird
    ASL Info:    31/male/reykjavik iceland
    Elite Ratio:    2.35 - 194/328/300
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    the ill lament of the honeyed tongue
    speaks and sings
    to the pecking
    of the treeless meadowlarks.

    & the breathers
    of the brows delight
    ignite the ancient romances
    of loves lost gnashing

    feeling the pavement
    along
    the
    way

    & all the years of grass
    & the dancing metal of our youth
    collapsing in passing
    and re-passing

    of, & like the water
    of our melting lips
    that lick the little fires
    of the agape moons nightly passions.

    & we engage the night
    & re-engage the night
    & rearrange the night
    while the methods of repetition delete me

    as they always delete me...

    & the stillness
    that is still inside
    boars holes
    into the elegant mind of mine.




    Submitted on 2007-07-27 12:39:50     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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