Description: I blamed myself for a long time for nothing. I realized I didn't need this guy who made me a different person...took away my friends...my smiles....everything
My Heart is cut in a hundred pieces laying by my chair
I started to write you a letter but then realized you didn't care
It started out by telling you all the things I feel
Then I thought a little more and realized it wasn't real
I thought about our kisses which at the time made my heart melt
Every single touch I thought about wasn't really what it felt
Photos I thought told a thousand words or maybe even more
They lay cut in pieces with my heart over on the floor
Smiles that gave me butterflies and took my breath away
I looked at them in pictures and had nothing left to say
I wrote down in my letter that you'll always have that place in my heart
I thought about it a little more and realized we are better off apart
I tried and tried to cry for us and wondered why things weren't the same
I came to realize it wasn't me but you who I should blame
Your turned me into someone else and took away my life
I sit looking at the pieces on the floor and realized you gave me the knife
I thought this was absolutely great! I enjoyed the rhyme n it flowed very well. My favorite part was the last line; it really tied the beginning to the end well and nicely closed off the poem!!! Awesome job!!!
Submission Name: *The Cut Heart*
