Sometimes A Dream -------------------------------------------
Sometimes a dream shakes your mind and soul,
makes you face a truth that you've avoided
or revoke a lie that you've made yourself believe,
if only to cope. Sometimes a dream is what you need to wake you up.
revoking lies youve made yourself believe... awesome idea... i really like this poem... i can fully relate to it (as im sure lotsa other ppl can) as long as the dream aint a night mare i dont mind waking up... though it would be easier to wake up if i ever got to sleep but anyways... good write
Sometimes a dream is what you need To wake you up.
this line speaks volumes to me. dreams are so very powerful. i have had strange dreams all my life. my mom thinks i'm a little crazy 'cause of the stuff i dream about. 'member the dream i had of you being sick? happens to me all the time. anyway, your poem hit the mark for me! give it some room to breath before you delete it.
i like this this is defently really true...ive had alot of things happen in my dreams that relate to stuff going on in my life...my weirdest was i kept having a dream of seeing some one shoot themselve...but i could only see a shadow of the person...then i found a paper lying on the floor ...that said wish you had known me...i had this dream for like four weeks...then i foundout my uncle who i told severaltimes i was goin to come visit him...had shot him self in the head...i kept saying i was goin top visit him cause i never really knew him...i think the shadow represented that...sorry for the babble...
anyways aboutyour piece youve written...dont delete this...even if you dont like it you should always save it just in case i know your prob just saying thisbecause you dont seem very happy today.. the last two lines are fantastic...all of it is..and the first two lines...sometimes a dream shakes your mind and soul...reminds me of the many times ive woke up shaking...crying...all my emotions literally causing me to shake vilently...anyways stop bein so hard on yourself cuddle...smiles ange