I spent some time reading your poems. One thing that I noticed is that they are all almost the same. If your going to write, have some versatility. Sounds like children's book poetry.
this, will simple words hits a deep spot within me and thats really hard to do, i see you write about real things. i love that in a writer. to me ( though i may be wrong, i dont know you) you seem to jusst try to realate with you reader and i lveo that to. that makes a person real