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    dots Submission Name: J.R. dots
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    Author: EyesOfMight
    ASL Info:    17/F
    Elite Ratio:    3.44 - 11/14/16
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 121
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 881



    Description:
       cant really explain it... its been one of my recoring nightmares... the nightmare went into a lot more detal but i thought id spare my self of that... yep yep... just venting i suppose :)


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    dotsJ.R. dots
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    Shaking
    Breathless
    Terrified

    Blurred vision
    Crimson hands
    Empty eyes

    He leans over her as she sleeps
    He can feel her terror
    She can feel him there above her

    The sun rises and the metal shines
    His hand is ready
    Her heart is soft

    She fights to stay asleep
    She would rather fight her dreams then see reality

    He presses his lips to her throat
    Her body shivers and shakes
    He smiles his poisonous smile

    She feels a sharp freeing pain
    On her shoulders
    It travels across her chest

    Her eyes flutter open and she sees him
    He is staring straight into her eyes
    And quickly pushes the shining metal to her throat

    “I found you love, I told you I would”




    Submitted on 2007-07-27 22:21:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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