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    dots Submission Name: Sugar Sicknessdots
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    Author: October_s Child
    ASL Info:    19/M/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.45 - 16/13/12
    Words: 254
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 106
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1572



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       07/28/07


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    dotsSugar Sicknessdots
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    Show me something beautiful
    enough to lure me home
    enough to feel the walls around me
    enough to watch me turn
    the space between us is vaster
    vaster than the space of stars and lights
    vaster than the millions of hearts
    the millions of hearts that pump to start
    the millions of hearts that start to turn
    enough to create something more like you
    and something beautiful as beautiful as space
    show me something that's not so dark

    My heart is yours
    Yours to bring to never
    Yours to tear apart
    Yours to love forever
    Yours to kick around
    I'm Yours, Yours alone

    Your heart has shown me mercy
    a mercy never spark
    a spark no lighter than a spark can darken
    Your heart has shown me what I need
    enough to stroke enough to bleed
    a heart to be seen
    long enough to be torn apart from me
    Fall apart to reach my start
    the start I feel first beat my heart
    my heart is not a part of me
    my heart's not mine at all

    My heart is yours
    Yours to bring to never
    Yours to tear apart
    Yours to love forever
    Yours to kick around
    I'm Yours, Yours alone

    Do you feel the way that I do
    It's all I ever wanted.
    I thought I made it, I felt for a minute
    the world was wide enough
    I wanted more
    it wasn't much
    I want to start or learn to fall apart.




    Submitted on 2007-07-28 16:55:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice bro, reeal nice. Pumpkins-esque. A lot of it, some parts.. kinda stealing, but yeah know still really good. Goin' on my faves fa sho
    | Posted on 2007-07-30 00:00:00 | by Apple-Man | [ Reply to This ]
      Your titles crack me up. This piece is beautiful. The love and devotion that you convey in this piece is beyond this world. I truly love it.
    love and peace,
    lynn
    | Posted on 2007-07-29 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]



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