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    dots Submission Name: 8dots
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    Author: October_s Child
    ASL Info:    19/M/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.45 - 16/13/12
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 55
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    Pull your world over me
    come and make me feel
    anything it takes just bring me there with you
    hold me, and don't ever let me go
    as crazy as it sounds, I don't really want to know
    save me baby,
    save me please.
    you come take me there.
    not just for the place but for the sun that has fallen below you.
    I could die right now and not be so scared
    I'm so scared.
    because my world lies upon your heart now
    and now your all I hear
    and you are all I see for miles
    now your what I fear for
    now your what I fear




    Submitted on 2007-07-28 19:00:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I really love this piece too. Why 8 for the title? I like how you start it by saying "Pull your world over me".
    That is a very powerful image.
    Love and Peace,
    lynn
    | Posted on 2007-07-29 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]
      love it loads!! its kinda stop abruptly kinda for me! i dunno but u made the point!! good job!
    ~akaila~
    i like this one 2!
    | Posted on 2007-07-28 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]



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