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    dots Submission Name: 2063dots
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    Author: October_s Child
    ASL Info:    19/M/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.45 - 16/13/12
    Words: 153
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 45
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 864



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    Sorry.. I don't know.. Take me home..
    Let me.. watch me bleed... spin around again
    I saw you heading for that door
    anytime I need you
    I wait too long

    Ask me.. I don't know.. let me go..
    test me.. I won't scare.. give it to me..
    I need you waiting for me there
    and everytime I need you
    your already gone..

    I miss you.. trapped inside that hole with foggy eyes
    I surrender in my dreams, I'd before her
    I commend you, Ill death defy, find some light
    I don't believe you
    not for second
    all her secrets are going to die

    trust me, I'll hold on.. won't let go.
    stop me, here me out.. I'll be loud

    I want to go home
    I want to go home




    Submitted on 2007-07-28 19:15:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Why 2063 as the title? I find your words very interesting, but in some parts they leave me a little
    confused. It might help if I know what you think it's about or what your inspiration for writing it iwas.
    love and peace,
    lynn
    | Posted on 2007-07-29 00:00:00 | by lynn7 | [ Reply to This ]
      i like this one!! very good well written good joB!
    ~akaila~
    | Posted on 2007-07-28 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]



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