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    dots Submission Name: Summerdots
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    Author: October_s Child
    ASL Info:    19/M/Canada
    Elite Ratio:    3.45 - 16/13/12
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Misc/Longing
    Total Views: 37
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 777



    Description:
       It's old and corny, but I LIKE it


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    dotsSummerdots
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    Sun rise my blue skies
    whisper whisper
    red hair and blue eyes
    sweet smile sweet smile
    fireflies hissing
    rain drops
    hard felt
    sweet kisses
    sweet lies

    stare into that sunrise
    burn your mind out
    look behind now
    leave your past and I might
    run so far away
    maybe where we go
    we'll be alone
    and nobody will know
    just where we ran off to

    whimper
    drop my backfire
    show your hideouts
    look around now
    I love when we're not working right
    we'll just live a hype now
    maybe eternity will throw us a bone
    maybe we'll just last
    staring at you
    strong, stronger.




    Submitted on 2007-07-28 19:17:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like it! i dont really find it that corny! nope not really! it was kinda sweet!
    ~akaila~
    | Posted on 2007-07-28 00:00:00 | by iluvpoetry_1 | [ Reply to This ]



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