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    dots Submission Name: The Change From My Pocketsdots
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    Author: John Ratliff
    ASL Info:    21/M/OK
    Elite Ratio:    3.23 - 27/42/20
    Words: 227
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 451
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1275



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       i know its a bit unflow in places but its not flow, its message


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    dotsThe Change From My Pocketsdots
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    Well she took all the change from my pockets
    Then she stole the keys to my car
    But she really put the hatin’ knife in my heart
    When she cut all the strings on my guitar

    Now I see only letters,
    And the music can’t play or be played
    And that’s only a song half written
    So I know I’ll be going insane

    No, it’s not because now I’ll be lonely
    And it’s not because I’m swimming in booze
    It’s just at the end of the day
    Because of her ways
    I got me no strings to pluck the blues

    She tells me that I should have seen what she needed from me
    Which means, I guess, that all the sex wasn’t free
    Because last night that bitch snuck around with some wire snips
    And cut my true love’s neck from E to e

    That woman can’t play or be played.
    Not even for a short melody, or kiss
    But the only time I’ll compare my guitar to a girl
    Is if the strings are broken like a good woman is

    No, it’s not because she up and she quit me
    It’s not because she was something to lose
    It’s because when I’m stoned and alone
    And she hasn’t come home
    I got me no strings to pluck the blues




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      Bravo my man, you have created a wonderfully sardonic piece here and I am sure that other pickers will be able to immediately relate to your obvious loss.
    | Posted on 2007-07-29 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]



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