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jupiter's going away. & with still, steeple hands i brush aside the sky. there are no new futures for me to see there. live dye-cast into fuchsine with the superlative down fingers that you keep around your throat. death is only as romantic as you make it & your daily suicides of the heart are a given; splendid and mossed in timeless frenzy, i shift my planetary movemnts to avert your eyes. the ones as black as my bird. the unstoppable fantasy of that phonecall that you can't seem to make, blisses on my tongue all the inside, russian responses, short and full of volumes, that i release into your perfect smaller ear. believe in me when you're dreaming, & my purposeful laurels willl crowd around your neck like the necklace that you never where. i am still the moon hung over your head for the instant that you were capable of a perfect love unwound & bound for nothing but endless longing from afar... |
Very good. I found it to be a refreshing start away from the rest of the other poems who feel like they repeat themselves at every single sentence. Kind of gets annoying after awhile though But my favorite line had to be believe in me when you're dreaming, & my purposeful laurels will crowd around your neck like the necklace that you never where. At first, I will admit it confused me. But once I got a close grasp at it, I was impressed. Good work. | Posted on 2007-08-06 00:00:00 | by darkmoonchild | [ Reply to This ] | Wow.. | Heyy birdy WSUP! hope all is good with you my talented poetic friend this piece was amazing..i loved every bit of it..the picture is bright starts beautiful and ends beautiful "death is only as romantic as you make it & your daily suicides of the heart are a given;" wonderful you might just wana correct your spelling (not a big deal) "like the necklace that you never where"= wear props | Posted on 2007-08-04 00:00:00 | by Ani | [ Reply to This ] | |