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    dots Submission Name: What You Think Is Wrongdots
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    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 156
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    Description:
       I Hate Him So Much
    I Hate Everything he Does And Says
    Yet i Want Him As My Friend
    Im Confused


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    dotsWhat You Think Is Wrongdots
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    you think its all about you
    but its not
    you think the world revolves around you
    but it dont
    get over yourself
    cause i know im over you
    it just had to take a decent guy to show me what im worth
    he has shown me more in two weeks then you have in 7 months
    you think that im hung up on you
    im not
    you think i really care what happens to you
    i dont
    im sick of it all
    you have lied to my face told me you loved me when you didnt
    im sick of you
    I HATE YOU
    dont you understand
    i want you in my life but i cant take the way you treat me
    you accuse me of everything
    and when i tell you something you dont want to hear
    its all my fault again
    fuck you
    im over you but i want you as my friend




    Submitted on 2007-07-30 05:57:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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