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    dots Submission Name: Prince of Darknessdots
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    Author: Lavender
    ASL Info:    20/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.09 - 101/125/59
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 625
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    Bytes: 650



    Description:
       Just to let you know, this is NOT about Satan, lol. It's about Darkrai (PokeMon) He's the most awesome PokeMon ever!!! :D


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    dotsPrince of Darknessdots
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    Your dark aura surrounds me
    It makes me feel invincible
    And this unvunerability
    Makes me want more

    So let me move closer to you
    Just let me touch your darkness
    Let me be one of the few
    To actually feel your power

    Oh Darkest of the Dark
    I'm drawn to you like moth to light
    You captivate my heart
    I'm taken prisoner in your mind

    Can you not see,
    Dear Darkest Prince,
    Just how much you mean to me?
    I wish you could be forever mine

    I may not catch you
    But I have already caught you in my heart




    Submitted on 2007-07-30 17:44:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ok well i was gonna say this is soo sweet and all until i read the part about it being about a pokemon. i thought it was about a guy that you were in love with! you tricked me. oh well. good write.
    </3 lisa
    | Posted on 2007-07-31 00:00:00 | by 777sacrites777 | [ Reply to This ]


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