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    dots Submission Name: Twodots
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    Author: kyml
    Elite Ratio:    4.37 - 31/45/12
    Words: 24
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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       So, yeah, it's late, and I'm bored and I haven't been on this site for a rather long time. This is just some short bitter-sweet thought from my tired mind. Tell me what you think.


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    dotsTwodots
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    Two’s enough
    Like night and day
    Two’s enough
    Some song did say
    Though two’s enough
    I’m sad today
    Because one half’s
    Too far away.




    Submitted on 2007-07-31 01:49:53     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like it, it's very clear.

    What good is a half on its own, because it is so wistfully melancholic.

    I will be such in three days, for a week - which I will not even come close to your tribulation. Correct? But still, a week seems so much!

    -M.
    | Posted on 2007-08-01 00:00:00 | by Mandolin | [ Reply to This ]


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