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    dots Submission Name: They Were Perfectdots

    Author: AngelinDisguise
    ASL Info:    23/F/AUS
    Elite Ratio:    2.23 - 133/171/100
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1058
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 332

       I Did Not Write This I Dont Know Who Did But I Love It

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    dotsThey Were Perfectdots

    They were perfect,
    They were beautiful,
    They met in the middle of nowere,
    in the middle if nothing,
    & they kissed where everyone could see,
    No words,
    No before
    No after
    They kissed and it was perfect
    It was beautiful,
    It was everything,
    It was nothing

    Submitted on 2007-07-31 06:42:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I agree, this is a lovely poem. Can't help you on who its by though.
    | Posted on 2007-07-31 00:00:00 | by Lord Bane | [ Reply to This ]

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