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    dots Submission Name: Life and Deathdots
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    Author: the heartless
    ASL Info:    15/male/LA
    Elite Ratio:    3.46 - 24/68/43
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 124
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    dotsLife and Deathdots
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    Life is the essence of pain
    Death is the key
    Life is the chain
    Death is the way to be free

    Life and death mixed
    Is that the way to be fixed

    Life is a hell
    Death is a pleasure
    Life creates a shell
    Death creates a measure

    A shell of blinding hurt
    A measure of time from birth

    To live you must cry
    To smile you must die

    Peace will never come to this wretched life
    Peace will only come once death ends this strife




    Submitted on 2007-07-31 19:30:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ry! I love it! It's so deep and passionate! It has such great depth to it! You capture your feelings in it.Good job Ry! Keep it up!
    | Posted on 2007-08-01 00:00:00 | by Fallyn Angel | [ Reply to This ]
      Hey, freakin well written...but I choose to think the opposite. Death...it is so f*cking over rated.

    "Death is the key
    Life is the chain"

    Good stuff there maynard.

    "To smile you must die"

    Not sure if that is significant or just a forced rhyme. Reads more like a forced rhyme to me.

    Peace is over rated to, but this piece is 95% solid.

    Nice insight. Thanks for sharing.

    | Posted on 2007-07-31 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]



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