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    dots Submission Name: My love philosophydots

    Author: Lover girl
    ASL Info:    17, female
    Elite Ratio:    4.39 - 83/54/24
    Words: 180
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 780
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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       True love is hard to find and even harder to keep. Hold on to your love. And even if you may loose the person that takes your breath away and makes you weak in the knees don't forget them. Don't even try because it will never leave you. That love that you felt will always be there wether you want it or not. So imbrace it. Deal with it. And Hope that you can go on with you life.

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    dotsMy love philosophydots

    Love is something not borrowed
    Nor can it be turned off and on
    For love is an on going feeling
    Even when your brain says it's gone

    Our hearts will never stop loving
    The people our true love bestows
    But why does our love keep on going?
    Why won't it just stop when they go?

    Our love is a magical feeling
    That no one can quite comprehend
    It can happen when someones stoped waiting
    It can happen between two good old friends

    What matters is how love is treated
    And how a relationship's maintained
    You never know what might happen
    And who you may loose in the end

    My philosophy is quite simple
    My objective, I hope, is quite clear
    Find love and hold on with passion
    Never forget the lessons you've learned

    For love will follow regardless
    Whether you're hopless,
    Or torn

    Our love will always be with us
    We are never without someone near
    Just look in your heart for the answer
    And you will find it all to be clear

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    This poem is really good. I absolutely enjoyed reading it. You are very talented. The wording is very simple and the message is clear.

    Our love will always be with us
    We are never without someone near
    Just look in your heart for the answer
    And you will find it all to be clear

    This is my favorite stanza.

    I must say I can relate to it, I guess everyone can. I like the flow of your poem. Keep up the good work

    Nice work.


    | Posted on 2008-06-06 00:00:00 | by shabnam | [ Reply to This ]
      This is excellent, and wise beyond your years! I can't understand why it hasn't gotten more comments!

    Nice work, lovely lady!
    | Posted on 2008-05-31 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]

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