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Before something bad happens
Before theres that one final goodbye
Something hits you
That you dont relize
Weather its that one last hug
That feels like they dont want you to let go
Or that final kiss of knowing you'll never kiss them not even once more
The relization you to relize till the final goodbye is said
Knowing that that last day spent together
Was time of happiness
It was his last kiss he gave me
& that last hug goodbye
We were already going down
& i had already had relized it
His last hug he gave
Was a hug of never wanting to let go
But I had to and i did
& then my heart had turned cold
It was that last day spent together
Where I clung to him as if it was the last time i'd seen him
Even though i didnt know that day would be the actually last day of seeing him
It was the sound in his voice
The look in his eyes
The Knowing i'lll never be with him again
That has mad me cry
In Love once
& Lust A few Times
Not Regretting Much
But one thing & I have relized
Everything Always Happens For a reason
& I finally know The feeling that i felt for my first love
I can really feel for someone else
Its just those lasts of a relationship
kill and cut
but knowing that i had a chance with them
is something better than nothing at all
ive matured and i know alot
i would never hurt someone on purpose
i would never cheat or lie
the only thing i would do that would be bad or good
is steal your heart and combine it with mine
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