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dont be stupid boy

Author: justkillme08
ASL Info:    18/F/MA
Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 97 /170 /124
Words: 183
Class/Type: Poetry /Love
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Average Vote:    5.0000
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dont be stupid boy

If You Cant See Shes Crazie For You

& Wont Hurt You Like All The Others

& Doesnt Want To Be With Anyone But You

You Might Just Be Letting Go Of The Best Thing Ever

So You Should Talk To Her

Let Her Tell You Whats Been On Her Mind

About Everything In Her Life

Let Her In Dont Hold Her Out

She Wants To Help

Dont Be Stupid Boy

You're All She Seems To Think About

She Understands The Little She Knows About Whats Going On

But She Still Has Things To Say To You

Let Her Say It Before You Make Any Decisitions

& Let Her Tell You The Way She Wants To Tell You

But Remember Boy

No One Can Wait Forever

& Who Knows How Long She'll Wait

Just Talk To Her And Let Her Get Everything Off Her Mind

Because Im Telling You Boy

This Is Something You Shouldnt Just Let Pass By

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