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    dots Submission Name: School Daysdots
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    Author: Soulraven
    ASL Info:    31/Male/Illinois
    Elite Ratio:    4.05 - 510/481/142
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsSchool Daysdots
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    Lost inside our world of hate.
    Displaced waking up to late.
    Canít hear the alarm clock.
    We donít want to go join the flock.
    Who cares about asinine grades.
    Everything we learn eventually fades.
    Youíre tearing us up inside.
    Let us at least keep our pride.
    Teacherís haunting us with great distress.
    School making us feel stupid and depressed.
    Kick us while we are down.
    Breaking hearts but you donít hear the sound.
    We are the great thinkers of time.
    Those in my shoes understand this rhyme.
    Hang our knowledge on display.
    The noose slips and begins to fray.
    We must fight to write another day.




    Submitted on 2004-02-03 22:43:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Geez, you have a very negative attitude towards education. Maybe I was a wonk or something, but I actually liked school. I'm hoping to eventually get my Ph.d. Lack of education does hamper your future. Keep this in mind.
    | Posted on 2004-02-04 00:00:00 | by cuddledumplin | [ Reply to This ]
      lol!!! Thats something I like to read !!! I like texts that are revealing some substance about how we are manipulated to become original units of the great modern society !!! Good job
    | Posted on 2004-02-03 00:00:00 | by Aceofthedice | [ Reply to This ]


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