Description: ok..so..yea this is supposed to be about death..for some reason I was thinking about drowning and how I was sort of dark and evil and how you can't escape fate, the fact that we all die... hmm I think I might have to write something later about how you can escape the evil...maybe add to this I don't know yet..
Hmm I like this... but I feel like maybe you should elaborate s bit more.. your choice though. Besides that I thought you used some good wording.. I liked this "sliding down into shapeless depths"... brings a very creepy feeling to me. Good write.
dam.n, that was chilling. what a horrible way to go. the struggle would be so horrific, i think. you portrayed this well. i love the minimalism. nothing more need be said. nice work.
Wow, i really liked this. Short but chilling. The last line was so chilling! You described it perfectly, the helplessness and hopelessness. REally well done!
Submission Name: Timeless Evil
