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    Author: PrettyHeart
    ASL Info:    39
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/55/53
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Dusty Words

    Turn the page;past revealed
    ...care is taken.
    Yellow with age;years ago
    Read as you do
    ...words forsaken.
    Nothing is new;whispered lies.
    Tears they fall;words unclear
    ...sorrow is awaken.
    Silent words call;dusty thoughts
    Page after page;years and years
    ...heart is shaken.
    Feelings in rage;broken dreams
    Nearing the end;faded days
    ...loves mistaken.
    Again just pretend;your so real
    The final look;blurred eyes
    ...care was mistaken.
    Closed the book;love is blind.




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