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    dots Submission Name: Toxic Kissdots
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    Author: PrettyHeart
    ASL Info:    39
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/55/53
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 424
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 720



    Description:
       I don't know where this came from. I was thinking something totally diffrent when I started to write it. And as I sat and thought of the person I wrote it for this is what came out. I think it is a little weak in places so any suggestion would help


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    dotsToxic Kissdots
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    Toxic Kiss

    Lust trickles from your velvet lips.
    Leaving scarlet drops upon mine.
    Teasing me with hints of your wine.
    Greedy now for a few ample sips.

    Probing your velvet lips tenderly.
    My eager passion discovers more.
    Desires inside of me begin to soar.
    Expecting you to love me eagerly.

    Just when my desire raged for more.
    Your luscious wine ceased to flow.
    Bitterness within you began to grow.
    Creating in me feelings of a whore.

    Resent trickles from your toxin lips.
    Leaving venomous drops upon mine.
    Killing me is the toxins of your wine.
    Fading now from one to many sips.




    Submitted on 2007-08-02 09:35:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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