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    dots Submission Name: Time and Distancedots
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    Author: PrettyHeart
    ASL Info:    39
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/55/53
    Words: 235
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsTime and Distancedots
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    Time and Distance

    Time doesn't matter to the heart nor does the distance.
    The only thing that matters to the heart is the one chance.
    The one time you're allowed to follow your hearts desires.
    To be warmed by those embers still glowing from lovers fires.

    A chance feared by many but taken only by a very few brave.
    A moment to hold on to love you know a love you wish to save.
    Clenching every moment in your heart not letting the feeling go.
    Wrapping your memory in the feeling so you will forever know.

    Time doesn't matter to the heart nor does the distance.
    The only thing that matters is that you took the chance.
    That you took the time follow your hearts true desires.
    Allowing it to be warmed by those feelings of loves fires.

    A chance you feared but a chance taken for you were brave.
    Leaving memories for you to hold on to and a wish to save.
    Gripping every moment in your heart never letting them go.
    Saving the time shared in your mind so you will forever know.

    Time doesn't matter to the heart no does the distance.
    What matters is knowing that you allowed me the chance.
    You gave me the time to follow my hearts longing desires.
    What matters is knowing you still feel our love, it's fires.




    Submitted on 2007-08-02 09:43:03     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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