Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: A Strange Thing..........dots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: PrettyHeart
    ASL Info:    39
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/55/53
    Words: 509
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
    Total Views: 446
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2505



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsA Strange Thing..........dots
    -------------------------------------------


    The strangest thing happened to me today. I woke up with sadness inside me. At first I wasn't sure why. Then a thought of him (a past lover) went through my mind. I knew then why I was so sad I was leaving him behind again. Just like all the other times before. I sat in my chair in the bedroom and looked out the window and recollected my times with him. I realized something about us. We started out as friends and then when I was broken badly for the first time it was him that healed me. We talked for hours that day. What was a friendship grew in to something more. We became lovers. He healed me, but once I was healed and the hurt was gone so was I. I went running back to the one that broke me. We went on for years aware that what we done was inevitable it was meant to be. No longer was best friends or anything at that. That is until I was broken again. I wasn't looking for him, he found me again in my thoughts like he is so good at doing. I ran to him not looking for his love just his friendship that we lost but it wasn't there just our love. He healed me once again. I was no longer broke. I was happy again. In love once more with him. No I dont think I was ever really out of love with him. I just wasn't broken enough to need him. So I was healed again and went running back again to the one who broke me. Now I woke this morning with a sadness. A sadness of knowing I was not broke anymore. Knowing that I didn't need him any more. That was not the case though I needed him as my friend.I cried this morning when I woke up. Not knowing what would later happen in my day.
    No I was not broken again. still happy . I went on about my day and not another thought of him went by. Even though I did find him. He was there at the same park as I was. I walked up to him with a fear pounding in my
    heart. This was from wanting to need him again. We stood with this uneasiness talking to each other like we hadn't seen each other for awhile, that was not the case it was just a few month ago that he healed me. We said our greetings and that is when it hit me again. When he hugged me bye I cried because I knew I was leaving him again. This time though it was different he didn't heal me I was happy and I knew then it was forever. We would always be friends but he would never heal me again. I was moving on. I woke up this morning not knowing any of this was going to happen like it did. Strange things happen to you in strange ways.




    Submitted on 2007-08-02 09:47:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    147558

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Florida's Autumn Solstice written by closetpoet
    A Worsening Effect written by Daniel Barlow
    The Curtain Call written by faideddarkness
    // Seasonal Song written by ShadowParadox
    Untitled written by Daniel Barlow
    Dream written by closetpoet
    no sky on the other side written by teika5
    Honeymoon written by TheStillSilence
    Rooted in Nature written by Chelebel
    Compartments written by TheStillSilence
    Day 5 written by TheStillSilence
    None the Wiser written by endlessgame23
    Live In Between written by teika5
    a leaf of shadow and edge written by Daniel Barlow
    Across the bed written by expiring_touch
    In a Corner written by jeniecel
    Loop-di-Loop written by endlessgame23
    untitled written by Outlaw
    Relentless. The Visceral Fracture. written by Daniel Barlow
    Day 6 written by TheStillSilence
    A bit of Pain written by teika5
    Lost Inside the Race written by ForgottenGraves
    Starseed written by endlessgame23
    Deep written by Janesaddiction
    Coversheets written by TheStillSilence
    Adoration written by TheStillSilence
    (Untitled Song) written by TeslaKoyal
    Hyle written by endlessgame23
    Beauty Rest written by jackz
    Twin Intercept written by Daniel Barlow

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry