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Half A Clerihew for Captain Kirk

Author: annie0888
ASL Info:    49/f/LA
Elite Ratio:    4.76 - 327 /382 /122
Words: 13
Class/Type: Poetry /Comedy
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I love these stupid clerihews....

Half A Clerihew for Captain Kirk

William Shatner’s Rule of Drama:
Behind each word, insert a comma.

Submitted on 2007-08-02 14:32:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Half a clerihew! Still amusing, nonetheless.

Yes I agree I love them as well. Though I could never write one, it would entail a very amusing biography of someone.

Thank you for the laugh!

| Posted on 2007-09-23 00:00:00 | by Azuire | [ Reply to This ]
  ha ha HA!!! He did a voice in "Over the Hedge" - very funny b/c he was an opossum who dramatically dropped dead any time something happened.

nice little poem!
| Posted on 2007-08-03 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]
  I, think this, is a .... great, piece of (glances left and right) poetry. It, was very, funny, ha, ha.... ha.

And, weed, for....all!
| Posted on 2007-08-02 00:00:00 | by Magic Dragon | [ Reply to This ]

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