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    dots Submission Name: legacydots

    Author: layDsayD
    ASL Info:    29/f/florida
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 264/243/147
    Words: 60
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    afraid to sleep
    afraid of being taken
    a gift,a curse
    little gypsy
    eyes of earth
    was so easy once
    with the secrets hidden
    kept in locked books
    whispered from anceint voice
    how scary to be so small
    just know when it is ok to lie
    and baby ,be good at it

    Submitted on 2007-08-02 22:13:52     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I read this one several times for more of a clue. I only succeeded in getting caught in the mystery; perhaps that is your intention, though. The i and e are reversed in the word "ancient," by the way. I'd love to know your thoughts behind this poem. Perhaps you'll let me know?! :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-09-04 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]

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