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    dots Submission Name: Mind, Heart, Soul, Selfdots
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    Author: Forest Saint
    ASL Info:    21/M/US
    Elite Ratio:    5.79 - 26/35/29
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Deep Thought/Serious
    Total Views: 863
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 336



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    dotsMind, Heart, Soul, Selfdots
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    Mind always racing
    Heart always pacing
    Soul always sifting
    Self always shifting

    Mind never resides
    Heart never decides
    Soul never chooses
    Self never loses

    Mind sometimes shakes
    Heart sometimes breaks
    Soul sometimes faults
    Self sometimes halts




    Submitted on 2007-08-02 23:10:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I love this poem :) Simple but the parallels between Mind, Heart, Soul, Self is very interesting. And when you read the poem it also creates some sort of beat, like heartbeat.

    Very good:)
    | Posted on 2008-04-21 00:00:00 | by PrInCeToNgIrL | [ Reply to This ]
      Simple but good
    | Posted on 2008-03-04 00:00:00 | by Paddy21 | [ Reply to This ]
      It seems like its the same stanza, just with the last word in every line replaced with a different words (that happen to rhyme). Other than that, awesome.

    "Thats all."
    | Posted on 2007-08-11 00:00:00 | by Kiddo | [ Reply to This ]
      This sounds good but who is it about? or were you jusy typeing down your thoughts?
    | Posted on 2007-08-02 00:00:00 | by PrincessOfDark | [ Reply to This ]


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