You Are my ReasON -------------------------------------------
Why go to sleep at night
8 hours just to dream
Why call you in the bedroom
for you to cuddle me
Why wake up in the morning
to get on with my day
Why bother picking up
the mess in this place
Why should I make a list
and do the things that I should do
you're my only reason, it's you
Why drag myself on into work
and put up with my boss
Why pick myself back up again
after a family loss
Why even bother bending over
just to tie my shoe
You're my only reason it's you
It's you who keep me coming and going
It's you who I think of when I'm down
It's you who when you're gone
I wish that I had you here always around
'cause it's you who put a smile on my face
even when I'm going through the hard days
you're my reason it's you
This line is startin' to become one of my 'normal' comments, but it almost always needs to be said: It would be easier to read/"listen" if you would put the type of music into description. Ie. is it slow/fast tempo, whats the major instrument etc.
Anyways back to the real subject, you asked for thoughts and here are a few:
First of all it has a nice flow on it along with the very passionate lines. They strike harder than 1000 volts ;)
There is few repeats - perhaps too many for my likin' - yet it works. Im impressed. Yet i would suggest you try not to be so questioning in the lyrics.
These incomplete ( in your opinion ) lyrics work quite good, now you just need to 'finish' it up and make some information about the music for those.
Thats all, would love to read/"listen" the finished version when its done. So could you be so kind and pm me then?