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    dots Submission Name: The Dictator of Man Kinddots
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    Author: insanegemini
    ASL Info:    18/f/tx
    Elite Ratio:    2.33 - 24/50/56
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsThe Dictator of Man Kinddots
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    Can the say no?
    Will they?
    Are those whom we insist on calling they stamp a deny logo on what is desired?

    So many ways to get hurt
    Only one path to happiness
    Is it REALLY worth it?

    Those that have experinced the light of it say yes
    But other's that have lived in the dark and piercing presence of it
    Say nay
    There is truely is only one way to find out for oneself

    But how deep are we willing to plung into the sea of confussion and uncertainty
    What amount of luminance or realm of shadow are we prepared to confront
    How much trust and vulerablity are we able to toss out into the open
    In hopes that one DOES catch it gently

    Is ther honestly a correct way to face teh dictator of man kind whom we call love?




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