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    dots Submission Name: Genius or Insanitydots
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    Author: Peggy Paris
    ASL Info:    61/F/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.11 - 746/567/167
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 121
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       How can a person explain to others WHY writing poetry is a passion? Perhaps it takes another poet to appreciate the artistry.


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    dotsGenius or Insanitydots
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    My mind’s stray thoughts seem swept
    in hurricane’s command,
    too unpredictable
    to fully understand.

    When jagged fragments find
    a landing spot at last,
    their puzzled remnants form
    strange glimpses from life’s past.

    Bombarded sentiments
    lie hidden in debris
    that fill ideal worth
    with heartfelt sympathy.

    Somehow the stormy brew
    that fills my humbled brain
    derives a sense of glee
    from trying to explain.

    In artistry of words
    ideas can be caught,
    but artificial clay
    can’t form a human thought.




    Submitted on 2007-08-03 20:23:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I would have to classify this as an interesting take on what it is that all of the denizens hereabouts are attempting to complete. Writing can be a catharsis or just a true source of joy when all of those stray words fall into line and come together in a semblance of understandable thought.
    | Posted on 2007-08-20 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]
      I lovee this poem especially the last part:

    Somehow the stormy brew
    that fills my humbled brain
    derives a sense of glee
    from trying to explain.

    In artistry of words
    ideas can be caught,
    but artificial clay
    can’t form a human thought.

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    | Posted on 2007-08-08 00:00:00 | by Ani | [ Reply to This ]
      This is delightful, Sharon! I'll bet every poet and writer here that views this knows exactly what your brilliant verse describes!

    I've been away for a couple of weeks of holiday that I spent at my Ranch in the Panhandle of Texas, so am just now getting back to the site.

    Excellent work gal!
    | Posted on 2007-08-05 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      This is gorgeous work. If taken in pieces it's interesting but ahhh- the real meat and potatoes is when one looks at the piece as a whole. The idea here, pardon if I'm being too presumptuous, seems to me to be one I struggle to get across myself. The maddening joy- trying to express things through paper that sometimes you don't even understand in your head- it's life. Life the same way an impressionist brings life to a semblance of a personage they paint. The title, also, just makes the whole piece beautiful to me- Genius or Insanity- that's absolutely brilliant. I love that the piece wasn't what I thought it would be when I read the title.
    -Q
    | Posted on 2007-08-05 00:00:00 | by TechnoticQ | [ Reply to This ]
      damn, tonite i keep running into talent everywhere i really like this no [censored] ither its amazing wow!!!!
    | Posted on 2007-08-04 00:00:00 | by gothicgirl | [ Reply to This ]



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