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    dots Submission Name: darvoset happyness'sdots
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    Author: PryncessVynom
    ASL Info:    21/f/amarillo Tx
    Elite Ratio:    3.34 - 983/1059/228
    Words: 218
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 112
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    Description:
       im on darvoset right now (pain meds) for my wrist, this is what i have written, i will edit it later


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    dotsdarvoset happyness'sdots
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    drowning in the sand
    of time and disregard
    throwing out my thoughts
    for my falling star
    failings of purple shadow
    periwinkle stars
    lost inside your eyes
    i'm not who you are
    midnight shadows
    flitting past my brain
    not sure if you are real
    or a product of my pain
    drift away in death
    lost inside your touch
    floating with out sound
    i died outside your clutch

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    the blood at the end of the pen
    (pin?)
    holds more than i feel within
    driping blades
    (water or blood i'm unsure)
    bloody water
    or watery blood
    lost again
    i couldn't run
    (im sorry my love)
    bogged down
    a single tear
    the voices stop
    when he is near
    found inside
    a bloody pin
    (pen??)
    with more in tips
    than frozen within

    _________

    grasping deperately at tendrils
    of fast disolving faith
    spider like insanity
    is destined to be my fate
    candles burngin low
    lack of hope
    lost a soul
    lost outside
    found within
    cant seem to justify
    my plauge of sin
    letting go
    lost inside
    can't wait to leave
    to late to die
    losing touch of what is left
    touching base with my regrets
    calling from the depths of hell
    the tides have come
    to claim there shell




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