No one is as we are
Lust inside the void
We'll never be as one now
First to be destroyed
Scarlet flavored discord
Purple tainted lies
Left beside the well
Desicated eyes
Corpses lying rotten
Copses full of hell
Drinking to their death
Toasting to our health
Living dead inside you
Rotting out your core
I became your parasite
You became my whore
One more comment praising this piece.
Each line, with just a few words, you convey such a strong image, and each line in connected so strongly with the others that in the end, it truly is a 'poem', and not just a bunch of words put together.
The feelings of emptiness and rot really came through. Great read
damn! u have no idea how much i like this ok maybe you do considering you wrote. I I I can't find the words for this its truely amazing i only wish i could write that profound wow! i must add to my favs.
Submission Name: Parasite
