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    dots Submission Name: Divorcedots
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    Author: Cricket
    ASL Info:    19/F/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    2.48 - 81/51/27
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 647
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       I thought it to be obvious... No its not that great o fucking well


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    dotsDivorcedots
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    Ma where are you going when are you coming home?
    Ma why is your stomach getting bigger?

    Dad why arenít you happy that maís gonna have a baby?
    Dad what is a divorce does it make our family happier?

    Grandma can I stay here dadís not home again?
    Grandma why does my family hate so much?

    Ma can I go live with your new family?
    Ma is there something wrong with me and dad?

    Dad where do you go every night with out me?
    Dad why do you sleep in the bathroom by the toilet?

    Grandma we donít have any lights or water at home?
    Grandma what does love mean




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      Not that great? Well I thought it was pretty great. One just has to take it in context for what it is and one can appreciate it. It's the viewpoint of a very young little girl- so lost and so confused. You captured that feeling perfectly, I assume from personal experience. If I could venture a step further, it reads to me like a set of photos ripped from the scariest and hardest parts of an early and tumultuous childhood. I see the dark beauty of it.
    -Q
    | Posted on 2007-08-05 00:00:00 | by TechnoticQ | [ Reply to This ]


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