Not that great? Well I thought it was pretty great. One just has to take it in context for what it is and one can appreciate it. It's the viewpoint of a very young little girl- so lost and so confused. You captured that feeling perfectly, I assume from personal experience. If I could venture a step further, it reads to me like a set of photos ripped from the scariest and hardest parts of an early and tumultuous childhood. I see the dark beauty of it.