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    dots Submission Name: "The mask I wear"dots
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    Author: Magger32
    ASL Info:    18-female-PA.
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 53/131/124
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       LIfe as most of us know it.

    ~mag


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    dots"The mask I wear"dots
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    To hide these tears;
    To keep emotions locked deep inside;
    To keep my thoughts away from suicide;
    Donít count on me as my mind is solemnly drawn into two separate parts.
    I strive on the hate shadowed beneath the corners of my black UN beating heart.

    Inside my hate spirals like winding stairs.
    My mind is vividly scarred with fears.
    I hide away in this darkened cell of mine,
    Watching the drug stricken clock to pass time.

    Cuts and bruises are noticed in dawns early light.
    Disapproving glances as you give up the fight.

    You just have one night to live, forever hidden behind the mask.





    Submitted on 2007-08-04 12:05:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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